To tell you that he knows of his noble, none of the wise ones regretted his going much as he was loved by the Geats. The omens were good, they seen his strength for themselves. Watched him rise from the darkness of war, death was his errand and the fate he had earned. Sometimes a proud old soldier Who have heard a weave net of words for Beowulfs victory and remembering Beowulfs Bravery, over and over they swore that nowhere on earth or under the spreading sky would they find a warrior worthier to rule over men.
9 comments:
bout time someone else did it. I was getting bored of waiting. good poem it was cool.
well i have to dis agree with renato we did it at the same time but good poem
dude girl you snapped
yeah i know my poem is confusing. thats cause i was focusing on the alliteration. by the time i realized it was confusing i was like fuck it . i had 15 lines and i didn't want to change it. laziness had caught up to me. but yeah . so how you been? good?? great!!
yo what up dude....you snapped in your poem...i like when you said...Watched him rise from the darkness of war, death was his errand and the fate he had earned.....that sounded sexy....keep it up...
Well Tell Meh YY I Liked That Part That Paulyy Liked To0 . .
Lmao
Well Kepp It Up .
Youh Snapped On YOuhr Poem
I'm Jealous ;p
this was an alright poem
lol paulie snaped but yea it was a good poem n that part that paulie mentioned aint that bad i'll say i like that part to..lol
Hey chica, I mean, Nina! Thanks for you comment. I love the song "Dear Mamma" and I love 2Pac... that is, his good stuff, before he became bitter.
Keep up the good work, and don't slack off.... Where's your king/queen post???
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